Ehm... FanFiktion de BeyBlade

2. září 2013 v 19:35 | Roxanne
No... Jak jste si mohli již přečíst, píšu takovou fanfikci na BeyBlade ve formátu scénáře. Ne, že bych s tím měla nějaké plány, píšu to jenom pro radost, ale Marille mě přemluvila. Tenhle díl přešel dvěma přepisy, jedním ze sešitu do počítače a pak upravováním do téhle finální formy.
Ano, main character je Tenshi Tategamiová, ta samá, kterou mám v ségřině fanfikci. Abych jí tak nějak popsala: malý, stošedesáticentimetrový šestnáctiletý tvoreček, kterého ze všeho na světě nejvíc baví nasrávat svého staršího bratra. Za bey má Dark Cygniu (trochu jsempřekopala původní název souhvězdí Cygnus, protože se mi nelíbilo...) a ano, tři roky pracovala jako vzorný hekr a rekrut Temné Nebuly.
V tomto díle spolu jedou do Afriky, protože jí Kyoya přišel vyzvednout jako nápomoc do Wild Fangu... Ano, tato krátká povédečka je z Metal Masters, ještě předtím, než se vůbec odehrál zápas v Číně (Love ya, Caho-Shin!) a jaksi... se přepočítal v Tensiiné podlosti.
Má to ale menší háček. Er... je to v angličtině. Strašně moc se vám omlouvám, klidně mě pověste za nohy za převis v Uru'baenu a nechte mě tam tři roky viset, ale já vážně nemám srdce na to, abych to překládala. Jsem prostě zvyklá to psát v angličtině a v češtině by to ztratilo pointu, takže se ještě jednou hrozně omlouvám, ale já to nemůžu udělat! Chápu, že si to teďka nikdo nepřečte, a klidně mi i v komentářích můžete zanadávat, ale já fakt ne....
(Jo, pro pořádek- hvězdičky znamenají tón hlasu, nebo akci, kolečka, co si daná postava myslí a zbytek doufám pochopíte...)
Takže, doufám, že strýček Google bude nápomocný a , ehm... hodně štěstí!



[place: plane| characters: Tenshi, Kyoya | time: 19:30]

T: *jumping at her seat with exitment* I can´t believe it! I´m really taking trip to Africa!

K: Calm down sis. This is the 5000th time you´ve said that, you know?

T: Sorry, but…. I can´t wait! In few hours we´ll be in Egypt! And you know, in Cairo, there are those great pyramids that were made these long thousands of years ago, and you know, it´s a great honor to see them, especially to me, because how do you know, I studied Ancient Egypt. Do you want to hear some really interesting facts about it?

K: Just let me put something on. *putting on his headphones* °This is going to be a long trip…°

T: Bla, bla, bla, dead pharao, bla, bla, bla, 30 kilos of gold, bla, bla, bla-

K: °I just hate her, when she´s having these historical monologs… I just hope it won´t be the same as the last time… I have enough of Cleopatra and Jane Grey for my whole life! Why is she such a bookworm? Why did I took her with me anyways? Well, because she´ s one of the strongest blader I have ever seen and as an older brother I have some responsibilities for her, but… °

T: Hey! Earth to Kyoya! I just asked you something!

K: *putting off his headphones* Sorry, I wasn´t listening. Can you say it again?

T: Magic word?

K: Avada kedavra.

T: That´s not very polite, you know?

K: Just say it and let me answer you!

T: Just, what are your team mates like? And, actually, who is in our team?

K: Oh. Okay. Well, there´s Nile, a really strong guy, but pretty symphatic to me.

T: Okay. I just hope he´s not the same crump as you are.

K: *ignoring her* As the second general member, there´s Domorae. He´s got incredible sights abilities. But he´s a bit shy. I think you´ll like him.

T: Sounds like a nice guy. Who´s the sub?

K: I think it will be you, when there´ll be noone stronger than you.

T: Oh no.

K: What´s the matter?

T: Nothing. Anyways, there´s one think I wanted to talk to you. You know, I´m kind of strong-

K: You are incredibly strong.

T: *accomplished look* Well… I think that´s the matter of the problem I wanted to talk to you about.

K: So what´s the matter?

T: I- I was working by Dark Nebula for three years since I ran away.

K: WHAT?!

T: Don´t kill me, please!

K: *look of a guy that swallowed a fish bone* Argh- er- you- you… you were by DN?

T: Yes…

K: Why haven´t you told me before?!

T: I´m not going to explain you my motivations to anyone, and especially not to you.

K: I´m your brother!

T: Exactly! Why should I explain my motivations to you: cold-hearted, I-know-everything dude who thinks that he´s the best blader in the whole world!

K: I´ve never said that!

T: But you thought so.

K: °Damn girl, she reads my minds!° Sorry, but is it the reason why are you so strong?

T: Yeah. And also the reason that I have my Dark Move.

K: *totally shocked*

T:*American smile* But I don´t use him so often!

K: Okay…. °shocked smile°

T: Aren´t you sick? You look a bit green in the face…

K: Nothing…

T: Okay…. And did you know that the greates pyramid of Giza, the pyramid of pharao Khufu, who was also called Cheops by the Greeks was the tallest building in the whole world? But it was beaten by the building of-

K: *putting on his headphones again* °Just let her talk. She will soon tire up and fall asleep.°

Aftet ½ hour…

T: … and they actually found about 5000 kilos of gold in his tomb! Can you imagine that? 5000 kilos of gold!

K: °Help! Get me out of here, please! I will do anything, just get me out!°

T: Yes, like king, Tutie was good-for-nothing, but the golden mask they found there… what a treasure! That reminds me, that the tomb wasn´t actually made for him, it was made for-

K: °Just let me DIEEEEE!!!° *standing up* Tenshi, that´s so interesting but just let me get my notebook, all right?

T: Okay! Am I annoying you? If I do, you seriousely need to tell me!

K: °And you´re telling me this now?!° Well… Yeah, you are annoying, but-

[suddenly, on the seat in front of T. and K., there´s a writting about the projection of movie Hunger Games]

T: Yay! We will watch a movie! Have you not seen it?

K: *sarcastic voice* Nope. Of course I´ve seen it!

T: *putting on the TV* Come on Kyoya, it´s already starting!

K: °Jesus Christ, no. Tenshi and movies. God, if I ever did something bad to you, I´m so sorry. Just let me land safely after jumping out of the window, I beg you so much!°

[after 2 hours, K. is already dying from T.´s endless comments about the movie and is ready to jump out any time]

T: Wow, that movie was soooo awesome! Do you agree, Kyoya?

K: *pretending sleeping* °Never again.°

T: °So I finally finished him off? Well, sometimes, he needs a bit of headache, and that´s a job of younger sister, isn´t it? But still, I think I ran a bit overboard with that movie… Only once he needed to pretend sleeping, and that was a tuff time… Still, sometimes he needs to remind that there´s still someone in this world, who can make him cornered like a mice! And that´s all I´m doing.°
 

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1 Xanya Xanya | Web | 3. září 2013 v 14:10 | Reagovat

Ať žije google! :-D  Je to bezva :-)  Ale stejně,nejlepší byla Kyoyova reakce,když mu Tenshi řekla,že pracovala u DN :-D Z toho jsem nemohla :-D :D

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